Re: [Vtub] 現在高中課本都這麼油的嗎

※ 引述《plauge (當台北天龍人惹到你了嗎?)》之銘言：
: https://files.catbox.moe/tcxjbs.png

來幫忙潤飾一下句子:

1. The word appeared in Japan in 2016. (有個單字沒看見，猜可能是first)

>The term appeared in Japan in 2016.

2. With the help of motion capture software,
VTubers can move like a real person...

a. 前面用vtubers複數，後面的a real person可改為real people去對應
b. with the help of 可變得更加言簡意賅

With motion capture software, VTubers can move just like real people...

3. Their fans will make donations
if they feel a strong connection with the VTubers.

可改為
Their fans will make donations if they fall in love with vtubers peko.

讓學生知道peko可以當副詞修飾整個句子

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